Louis Myles Episodes 15 - 'The Longest Day'
Kidnapping and the action-world of TV's '24' will grip you in these five episodes.
3-5-1
INT: IN BARN
FX: THROUGH-COMPOSED SOUND BED OF MUSIC
FX: BARN NOISES SAME AS END OF 3-4-5. JACK HAS GUN IN HAND
JACK: Where is Olivia being held?
MAN: (in pain) Ahhh!
FX: GUN CLICK
JACK: Tell me where she is being held or I'll shoot you again!
MAN: (CONTINUES IN PAIN)
FX: SQUELCH AS GUN IS PUT IN HIS WOUND
JACK: You've got one more chance or I'll shoot in the same place
MAN: I DON'T KNOW WHERE SHE IS!
JACK: Stop lying to me!
MAN: I'M NOT - I was only in charge of stopping you two, I had no contact with them apart from that.
COLIN: Jack - come over here a sec...
FX: WALKING
JACK: What is it mate?
COLIN: I'm not sure we're gonna get too much more out of him…
JACK: I know
COLIN: How about if we get him to take me as a hostage to his boss - that way you can follow me and get to Olvia
JACK: Are you sure you want to do that?
COLIN: Yes, I'll take his gun and take him hostage - he won't hurt me.
JACK: Ok - we'll do that. (STARTS TO WALK AWAY)
COLIN: Jack...
JACK: (STOPS) Yeah?
COLIN: Cheers mate...
JACK: That's no bother...
FX: CUT TO WAREHOUSE SCENE TENSION MUSIC
3-5-2STEVEN: I've just been talking to my associates - it seems your man isn't complying with our demands
OLIVIA: He'll never give in to you
STEVEN: I wouldn't be so happy about his lack of cooperation - the less he works with us the more clinical we have to be with you
FX: PHONE RINGING
STEVEN: Johnson - look after her while I take this
FX: FLIP OPEN PHONE BOTH MEN ARE DOWN LINE AFTER STEVEN'S FIRST LINE - ALTHOUGH CUTS INTO MAN'S LAST LINE SO THAT STEVEN IS DOWN LINE
STEVEN: Hello?
MAN: I've got to the location but it is unsafe
STEVEN: What do you mean?
MAN: There were a few suspect people hanging around - for a remote location that seemed unsafe to me
STEVEN: You'll have to bring the hostage here - we can't have any more cock -ups.. And watch out for people following you - Felicity has been compromised. I'll send the location to your palm.
FX: FADE TO WAREHOUSE
3-5-3
MAN: Ok
FX: PHONE OFF
JACK: Good. Now get in the car and go to the location - (THREATENING) don't try any thing fast, or you'll regret it
COLIN: See you later Jack.. Come on.... (COLIN AND MAN WALK AWAY)
FELICITY: (FROM BEHIND)... Jack…
JACK: Hey…flick
FELICITY: I'm so sorry (starts to cry)
JACK: What for Flick?
FELICITY: I should have shot him earlier
JACK: Look you did you could - you didn't do anything wrong!
FELICITY: I did ,I did (cries)
JACK: Look. Go back to the office with Sylv - chill out and.. we'll talk about it later ok?
FELCITY: ok (sniffs)
FX: JACK RUNS OFF SOUNDS OF CAR STARTING AND DRIVING AWAY
SOUND BED OF MUSIC BEGINS AND RUNS THROUGH TO CLIMAX AT SHOOTOUT
3-5-4
FX: SOUND OF CAR PULLING UP X-FADED IN ON TOP OF MUSIC. JACK GETS OUT OF CAR AND STARTS TO RUN
JACK: (ON PHONE) Colin - it's me.
COLIN: (DOWN LINE) Jack - I can't talk..
JACK: I'm gonna go in from the back of the warehouse - the front looks too risky.
COLIN: Ok.. I'll try and create a diversion.. I gotta go
FX: DEAD TONE
MONTAGE OF JACK RUNNING /BREATHING - HIDING AND MOVING INTO POSITIONS TO SHOOT. HE GETS SPOTTED BY GUARD AT BACK ENTRANCE.
GUARD: Oi!
FX: JACK SHOOTS HIM, MAN DIES ON FLOOR - JACK RUNS TO DOOR AND CAN HEAR DIALOGUE FROM INSUIDE THE BUILDING
STEVEN: Now you see Olivia - we have two of you! (laughs) It all seems to be falling apart for your company doesn't
COLIN: Let her go!
STEVEN: I think today - maybe not! And anyway, what can you do about it?
COLIN: This!
FX: GUNSHOT. JACK BREAKS THROUGH DOOR AND RUNS IN. SERIES OF GUNSHOTS
JACK: STAY DOWN PUT YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK - GET YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK.
FX: GUNSHOT
JACK : Do what I say, or I will have to hurt you.
COLIN: Jack - what should I do with this one?
JACK: Don't kill him, just tie him up.. Is there any one else?
COLIN: Yeah.. One other - he's unconscious
JACK: Ok, tie him up as well - and get the police in here.
COLIN: Ok
JACK: (Runs to OLIVIA)
FX: UNTIING HER
JACK: You ok - Livi?
OLIVIA: (SNIFFS) I'm ok.. I'm ok.. you know me - I'm a stubborn old thing (STARTS TO CRY)
JACK: You're not old! Hey come here (THEY HUG) Look it's over now huh
OLIVIA: We're gonna loose the contract I;m..
JACK: Hey, hey
OLIVIA: I'm so glad you... I'm… I'm.. Thank you.
FX: OLIVIA KISSES JACK.MUSIC OUTRO