Louis Myles Episodes 14 - 'The Longest Day'
Kidnapping and the action-world of TV's '24' will grip you in these five episodes.
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EXT: OUTSIDE WAREHOUSE IN EP3 SCENE 5
FX: COLIN ON PHONE FX. JACK PACING ON GRAVEL MUSIC BED
1 JACK: Olivia must be in another location….
2 COLIN: no - all the other addresses in your area are commercial developments - it's impossible for her to be kept in one of those.
3 JACK: So what - she's being kept outside?
4 COLIN: No! - no… if she was being held outside it would have been bought to the Police's attention - it's too risky.
5 JACK: She's got to be SOMEWHERE dammit. Look, Colin, I know you did well in Paris, I'm grateful, but it's obvious that you're not getting things right (here)…
6 COLIN: (CUTS IN ON HERE) Jack leave it - you've got feelings for Olivia- I get that - but don't take it out on me
7 JACK: What do you mean?
FX: KIDNAPPERS MOBILE PHONE RINGING
8 COLIN: Jack they're calling again - I'll patch you through.
9 JACK: Ok.
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FX: COLIN AND STEVEN ON PHONE FX AS JACK LISTENS IN
1 COLIN: Hello?
2 STEVEN: I see your friend has taken a little excursion. How very clever. Unfortunately for you we are very advanced in our methods. Our phone signal has been re-routed and scrambled numerous times. You will have to accept that it is nigh on impossible to find us.
3 COLIN: What do you want?
4 STEVEN: Well you can tell Jack to return to your office with the schematics as first requested
5 COLIN: And then what?
6 STEVEN: And then our associate will deal with you
7: COLIN: What associate?
GRAMS: HITTING COLIN
8 COLIN: AHHH!
GRAMS: COLIN FALL ON FLOOR. JACK BREATHE HEAVILY
9 MAN: I'll call you back - we're being patched through
10 STEVEN: Ok, good work.
11 JACK: Colin? COLIN!!!
FX: BEEP PHONE OFF
FX: MUSIC BUILD THEN XFADE INTO
FX: FLICK RUNS ROUND CORNER. SOUND OF PHONE
11 STEVEN: Hello Felicity
12 FELICITY: They're following Colin…
1 STEVEN: Can you stop them?
2 FELICITY: Not without blowing my cover… shall I leave now?
3 STEVEN: No. stay undercover, otherwise we don't have any intel at all.
FX: FELICITY GETTING IN CAR
4 FELICITY: What if they find you?
5 STEVEN: Just stay undercover and try and put them off the trail
FX: XFADE INTO NEXT SCENE
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EXT: WALKING DOWN CASTLE STREET
1 SYLV: Thanks for coming to help me with the sandwiches Flick
2 FELICITY: (GIGGLES)that's no worry! I think Colin was getting a little bit stressed - so I thought I'd better give him some space.
3 SYLV: Oh good idea - well a nice prawn mayo sandwich should make him feel better - Hang on - isn't that him being coming out of the office?
4 FELICITY: I'm not sure - I don't think s….
5 SYLV: It is him! - and he's… he's being kidnapped flick!
6 FELICITY: (SHOCK) What do we do?
7 SYLV: Where's your car parked?
8 FELICITY: Just round the corner
9 SYLV: Well you go and get it and I'll watch where those two go….Quick - go!
10 FELCITY: Ok!
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INT: CAR DRIVING SYLV AND FELICITY
SYLVIA: (ON PHONE)…yes Jack that's right - we've just passed the junction to Harbledown -….Ok luvvie bye (HANGS UP) Here's your phone swwetie
FELICITY: Where is he?
SYLVIA: About ¼ mile behind us - he'll catch up!
FELICITY: Are you sure this is the right car we're following?
SYLVIA: Positive. Don't get too close Flick! - He'll know we're following him
FELCLITY: There's jack behind us now…
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FX: XFADE INTO NEXT SCENE 2 CARS PULLING UP ON GRAVEL.JACK GETS OUT AND CLOSES DOORJACK: he pulled up in that barn 400 metres back. I'm gonna go in after him.
SYLVIA: will you be ok?
JACK: Yes - fine. There's no other option. Flick have you ever fired a gun before?FLICK: No, no I haven't I.. I wouldn't know how to…
JACK: It's easy - just cock the gun like this
FX: Gun Cocking
JACK: and then fire using the trigger. It's automatic so you won't have to keep on cocking it.. Ok?FELICITY: yeah... OK.
JACK: Now only fire when I'm in danger - I don't want you getting hurt….Let's go!
FX: JACK AND FELICITY RUNNING ON GRASS - MUSIC BED OF SUSPENSE BUILDS UP XFADE INTO OUTSIDE BARN MUSIC STILL GOING
JACK: (Whispering) Ok Flick you need to cover me - stay back
FX: MUFFLED SOUND FROM INSIDE BARN SHOUTING AND HITTING COLIN SCREAMING
JACK: I'm going in - ready?
FELICITY: Yes
FX: JACK BREAKS DOWN BARN DOOR BY KICKING AT IT. IT CRASHES TO THE GROUND
JACK: (SHOUTS) Drop the gun. Put it on the floor!. Put the gun on the floor.
MAN: Stay back or I'll shoot him
FX: COLIN GASPING FOR AIR AS HE IS BEING HELD ROUND THE NECK
JACK: Drop the weapon!
MAN: Walk back slowly
JACK: Flick cover me! (pause) Flick! Flick?!
MAN: Drop the Weapon
JACK: Flick!
FX: GUNSHOT
MAN: (writhes in agony)
FLICK: shall I kill him?
JACK: No - he can lead us to Livi…